Sleeping Valor

Silly goose, go read the PROLOGUE. It's the longer version.

It seemed clear to me. =P But maybe I guess for those people who can't connect the dots without little numbers ot guide them, then maybe you'd have to. My ...

=P It's actually not, but villains tend to do bad things so it seems that way. She isn't scared because in rality both her parents were bad guys so she's ...

(well Yeah, but be could have robbbed the bank while he had his temporary powers. =P) =P The title was the orginal reason I kept skipping past your story, and ...

Well then I'll just have to keep readng because I really do want to know what chocolat has to do with all of this. (and if he has super powers, ...

=P No problem. I sometimes find myself feeling that way. Thanks for reading. ^_^

How many times am I going to do this? Yazra wondered as she stood in the middle of a burning village. In fact, it was the same village as it ...

:D Woot! *happy dance* People liked my story! ^_^ *thought it had fallen off the face of the planet* I will most definitely get started on the next part (and ...

*gasp* Another comment! ^_^ Yay! I'm glad the story interests you, my mind is reworking it a little, because the temptation to make her a gorgon (using that in a ...

o_O Umm...are you sure this shouldn't be in the poetry section?

Posted a bit of the new version of the prologue at the end of the first post. Lemme know if it looks better.

Thanks for your advice. You're absolutely right. >.< I must be more out of practice than I thought to have missed that. I've already started reworking the prologue already, though ...

Actually, I really apreciate the more harsh critiques. It's always nice that people like what you write, but it's just as nice to be able to make it better. It's ...

=P I didn't see that. Thanks!

^_^ Thanks for the comments everybody, since there is an interest I'll work on getting the first chapter finished! (and I'll see what I can do about clearing up who ...